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Love, anger, blood, or a rose bed
A path of stardom upon which chosens tread.
Danger of a poisonous apple to be fed
to an uncrowned beauty whose lips tell a tale unsaid.

The wall inside his head,
With imagination it is all set to be painted.
Imagination lit by the color-Red.

The depths of the ocean that can never be seen through
An open mind like the limitless sky, flying in freedom found new.
Of the beauty that lies in her eyes, she had no clue.

The wall inside his head ready to be born anew,
to unravel the mysteries that it held-the color blue.

Darkness, negativity, engulfed the sad sack.
So lonely, no one to catch her when she falls back.
But there is another face to this, that should not be held back.
Elegance, simplicity and beauty in those locks of hair falling on her bare back.

The wall inside his head says, "Explore! Experiment, with the most versatile of all" -the color black.

Peace, purity, everything that is right.
The moon in the night, pearls and diamonds sparkling in sunlight.
Cold winters all merry when snow is in sight.
His mind not willing to surrender in fright
of upsetting the face of the wall, that he might.
Ready to wear a new face, ready to come alive, the wall inside his head-In plain white.

Now, he picked up the brush and splashed colors on the wall to unfold,
locks of hair, white skin, blue eyes, red lips-A perfect mould.
Born from those colors was her and a tale, to be told, and re-told.
THIS IS A TRIBUTE TO ALL ARTISTS. Respect, love and peace to all. m/

Colors are most unique and beautiful thing sin the whole wide world. They express human emotions in ways unimaginable. So I put in a lot of thought in this.

I had a specific someone in my mind while writing this poem. hope you all can figure whose face it is! xD if not it's okay, let your imagination take control ;)
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anusaila622 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
you write really well..... the way u started off each separately and then how u put together it all in the end.... that is amazing really..... i wish I could write like that.... wow.. thats really crazy i should say!
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
first off. WHOO! YOU CREATED A dA ACCOUNT! and oh well, Thank you so much!! I'm really proud of this lol. (dont know if i can say that ;P) I'm gald you got the concept right . ^_^
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anusaila622 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
:D ur welcome! m glad! n ya! finally created the account!
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Bansini Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this poem.
Its so beautiful, and I adore how its meant to be a tribute for all artists! Its a magnificent tribute at that.
Love the last 3 lines so much! :love:
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much!! i almost missed your comments ! :iconhugplz: I'm really happy you feel that way! xD
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Bansini Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you are welcome!
I am so happy that I can see alot of new work from you these days. :heart:
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah!! i'm feeling really awesome too!! so relaxed and nice!! I LOVE SUMMER!
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Bansini Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lucky you, my exams havent started yet!
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha!! well i have some more in may :(
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funvampiremihihou Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the poem. You sure know how to describe what's going on in an artists mind before a piece of art comes to be, but then again you are an artist so it's not so surprising you would know, what's so amazing is the way you're able to put it on paper in this beautiful manner. ^-^
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwww that is lovely! :iconomgsocuteplz: your words really brought a wonderful end to my day!! thank you a lot for taking time in reading my poetry and also understanding it so well! i really am grateful to know you feel so about my art and skill! <3
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funvampiremihihou Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome~! ^-^
Glad to have made you happy. I guess it takes an artist to understand an artist. ^^
I look forward to see more of your artwork.
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep! sure! i just submitted another poem! looking forward to what you think! i'll be glad for a critique!!
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funvampiremihihou Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll look at it right away and let you know what I think~! ^-^
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep! sure, i just submitted another poem!! looking forward to your views. And i'll be glad for a critique!
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You wouldn't be talking about your brother in this, are you? Cause it sounds just like him.:aww:
I absolutely love the concepts of your poetry, truly. This is such a great piece. I'm a very big fan of color emphasis and color analysis in art.
As a matter of fact, this reminds me of a piece I've been wanting to do for quite a while now involving all of the colors of the rainbow. I think I'm gonna mention this when I get it done and post it. (eventually)
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is such a pleasure to hear!!!! i took a lot of time in phrasing this. ithought i'd make a collection of color poems. each one a seperate poem. but i had already phrased the end in my mind and well, i didn't think of my brother while phrasing this lol! ;P It's aimed at all the artists. i kinda wanted to show how much goes into creating a character. Snow whit was in my mind while creating this piece. If you give another read you'll be able to figure it out i guess. but i din't write this in the artists desc. cuz i wanted all of your minds to be imagining it your own way! and i'm so so every one thought of different things. that says how craetive people are and how vast minds are!!
oh great! and you should go on! And awww, hwo sweet of you to do that for me!
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, I miss-read that part of your artist's comment, then. Forgive my ignorance.^^;
It has been so long since I've seen Snow White. I'll have to watch it again some time soon. Although, now that I read it again, it makes sense. Very beautifully described.:aww:

Yes, art is so amazing, and the imagination is endless.:D

No problem. I'm really gonna think about this as I draw it.
It would be great if you did a poem for each color.:D
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely and thank you again and yes! i'll be waiting!
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CyborgDeamonEaterG Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
This is lovely , and it flows in such a nice way... perhaps your words are like paint, I'm a painter so its easy for me to sense the flowing of words in things like this, or mabey its from other things deep within my lake of a mind :heart:
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh! :icononiononionplz: that is so nice of you! xD Thank you sooo much! :iconloveloveplz: in the description i mentioned that this was a tribute to all the artists! For they are really a rare species :D yeah i'm an artist too, so i know the entire process that undergoes inside the mind, before you come up with a character. :D AND YOU ARE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL PAINTER! very deep and emotional concepts! I love 'em! xD
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CyborgDeamonEaterG Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
No Problems ;p

Yes, people say writing and drawing/painting are two different means of thinking but they really are not that different! and Artists are quite rare indeed :D all that happens within us are like fairytales and grand adventures of spontanious ideas that are all different and unique to all of us, but at the same time we understand each other and each others ideas even if we dont always agree:heart:

and thankies im still just learning though :icondragonhugplz:
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah so true :) and np :)
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CyborgDeamonEaterG Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
yuppers ;p
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of-the-skies Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! :clap: Nice imagery :)


Also there's a few spelling errors: 4th paragraph from the bottom, "lonley" is supposed to be "lonely"; last paragraph, "teh" is supposed to be "the". Hope you don't mind me correcting that... ^^;
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sorry, i was in a hurry :iconanoplz: and i was too excited to post it here! lol! anyway, my bad and thank you for pointing out the typos :D I'll surely correct it right away.
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DorkyPumpkin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it, especially the picutre! One typo: "Now, he picked up TEH brush and splashed black on the wall to unfold"
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks! yeah..er, lol...corrected it...that's why i prefer pen and paper rather than keyboard and notepad : P
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Ubrittes Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
simple and powerful picture. great. Congratulation.
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! xD
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Ubrittes Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
great picture. simple and powerful
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MsEgyptianPride Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Artist
Awesome poem and picture. The best sense of creativity I have encountered yet! Great job and love the timely thoughts you applied in your work. *Admires* :D
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMFG! thank you soooooo much for appreciating my poem!!! This really means a lot to me :iconmonkeyloveplz: SO i would like to ask you, my beloved reader, if you got the face he painted finally?
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MsEgyptianPride Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Artist
You're very welcome and you deserve that compliment more than anything! I love poetry and art, and I gave you that compliment from the heart :) But, that blue-eyed, red lipped beauty you painted is a person I do not know in mind...I can not recall someone with such beauty (:
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem, :D I'm sure you'll ge it soon :) if not, I'll you a note :)
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MsEgyptianPride Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks! I would love the help. Best thing about viewing other peoples' artwork is understanding the purpose of it and the meaning, which I strive to do in your work :)
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh thank yous so much for understanding :)
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MsEgyptianPride Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Artist
Youre very welcome! :) Thank you for giving me the opportunity to view your artwork :)
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Angel-Tsuki Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG! those are very kind words :D PLease do keep in touch :D
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